Bad Presentation

Before:

 

 

Repetition of the term ‘What is a Kangaroo’

Unnecessary and distracting red text.

Repetition of logo picture.

Information is redundant ‘A female is a girl’

No capital letters for pro-nouns.

After:

Simpler. More informative. And fabulous.

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